Reading progress update: I've read 7%.
I'm struggling with the tense shifts. I'm ok with the shift between first and second person depending on the character. The part that I'm having a tough time with is that the first and third episode of the 2nd person POV are in present but the middle episode was in 2nd person future tense.
I'm not sure I'm going to be able to stay in the story enough to enjoy this. We'll see.
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